This is a fiction story not based on any real experience.I took the base idea from a short story
It wasnt the first time I was left alone at home.My parents were out for the night at my sister's school.I decided to stay back at home as I wasn't that interested to watch her school's annual day.
I was through with an hour of being bored and started to think why nothing interesting or thrilling has been happening in my life?
I was through with an hour of being bored and started to think why nothing interesting or thrilling has been happening in my life?
Many window's bright lights stroked my window.I looked outside and peep into every house that i could see.Most of them are watching television.I could recognize that some people were watching MediaCorp.I sometimes match the televisions of peoples houses and see how many of them I can match.Its a nice one
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As I was looking through each window,I stopped at the peculiar one.It was diagonally below me.Maybe 3 stories below my level?I dont know...
What i saw was the most ferocious scene I had ever scene.
It was a man,A very tall,non-asian,a foreigner, for sure,stabbing a woman and i could also see there was another dead person laying on the floor.He kept stabbing a woman.I was astonished and scared looking at it, but I didnt look away.Maybe iv seen alot of action and violent movies that maybe those type of scenes dont really affect me anymore?
I did not shift my gaze i continued to stare at the woman being stabbed.I felt my body go numb,my hands sweaty.I did not know what to do,but i was sure not to look away.It just seemed as if i was hypnotized until I saw another man walk to the window.Now that guy was asian.He was chinku(small eyes)
He caught my sight.I thought I saw death right in front of me.I looked away,hastily closed my windows and curtains and peeped through the curtain.I could see he was gone.My eyes kept looking around for him at the entrance to my block.I thought he would be after me.As my eyes kept wandering everywhere,it caught the sight of him peeping through another window and then I knew.
I knew that he knew that i looked at the murder scene.I shut all the curtains of all the rooms and switched off all the lights.I got the pen knife ready at hand and locked the door..
I kept pacing the house and kept looking through the door peephole to see if he was waiting outside...
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Is he gonna come and kill me?Am i gonna run outta the house for help?Or call the police and my parents?
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Im still thinking what to write next.But what do you guys think?
person game :)
As I was looking through each window,I stopped at the peculiar one.It was diagonally below me.Maybe 3 stories below my level?I dont know...
What i saw was the most ferocious scene I had ever scene.
It was a man,A very tall,non-asian,a foreigner, for sure,stabbing a woman and i could also see there was another dead person laying on the floor.He kept stabbing a woman.I was astonished and scared looking at it, but I didnt look away.Maybe iv seen alot of action and violent movies that maybe those type of scenes dont really affect me anymore?
I did not shift my gaze i continued to stare at the woman being stabbed.I felt my body go numb,my hands sweaty.I did not know what to do,but i was sure not to look away.It just seemed as if i was hypnotized until I saw another man walk to the window.Now that guy was asian.He was chinku(small eyes)
He caught my sight.I thought I saw death right in front of me.I looked away,hastily closed my windows and curtains and peeped through the curtain.I could see he was gone.My eyes kept looking around for him at the entrance to my block.I thought he would be after me.As my eyes kept wandering everywhere,it caught the sight of him peeping through another window and then I knew.
I knew that he knew that i looked at the murder scene.I shut all the curtains of all the rooms and switched off all the lights.I got the pen knife ready at hand and locked the door..
I kept pacing the house and kept looking through the door peephole to see if he was waiting outside...
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Is he gonna come and kill me?Am i gonna run outta the house for help?Or call the police and my parents?
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Im still thinking what to write next.But what do you guys think?
Nice but a few grammatical errors
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yea i know.my english kinda sucks :/
ReplyDeletenot really feeling the scariness. but oderwise i gues its ok.
ReplyDeletei gues u can add more imagery and sensez
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